Hands grasp
A glass
Fingers turn the nob
Water
Cold
Fresh
gushes from the faucet
Thrust cup under the stream
fingers tense as the cup grows in weight
just in time, you pull it away
turn off the faucet
sit
and
enjoy
the cold water
from the glass
as your tired fingers
no longer need to be tense
~Remedyleaf
This is nice.
Just a couple things. I just spotted a little typo where you said, “turn of the faucet.” It should be, “turn off the faucet”! And maybe a period at the end?
Otherwise I love it! 🙂
Fixed the typo, but no punctuation is the style… 😉
Yeah, I’ve done that too. 🙂